Technical Reports and Occasional Papers

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Revising Writing


TR 26. The Effects of Prompts Upon Revision: A Glimpse of the Gap Between Planning and Performance, by Wayne C. Peck (Reading-to-Write Report 7). This report analyzes the think-aloud protocols and finished texts of students asked to revise a written assignment. Students introduced to task representation and prompted to "interpret for a purpose of one's own" on revision were far more likely to change their organizing plan than students prompted merely to revise to "make the text better." However, the protocols also revealed a significant group of "intenders" who made plans they were unable to translate into text. May, 1989; 26 pages; $4.00.
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OP 21. Redefining Revision for Freshmen, by David L. Wallace and John R. Hayes. This study investigates the impact of explicit instructions on the revising strategies of college freshmen. Wallace and Hayes find that students instructed to revise globally produce better revisions than students simply asked to revise. They were able to produce a significant increase in global revision and in revision quality with just eight minutes of instruction, which allowed students to access revision skills they already possessed. July, 1990; 10 pages; $3.50.
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